anyway, I was just diddling around with this thing ( I guess we can call it a poem) and I was thinking about how much fun a little group brainstorming might be. can anyone else come up with some verses to add in between? or fix the existing ones?
everyone knows,
but doesn't care to disclose
what some might suppose
about the nature
of
senility.
is it as bad as they propose,
aging your mind till it slows?
well you can lose all your woes,
when I tell you about having
no
accountability
don't listen to the "pros"
and come winter snows,
take out your hose,
and test the neighbors
ice skating
suitability
because anything goes,
even when they oppose,
just take off your clothes,
and the wind blow through
your fertility.
go ahead,
let your mind decompose,
with your backside exposed,
and you too may find
that Senility
is not really
a disability
6 comments:
What pops immediately into my mind is a bumper sticker I once saw:
"Parents, avenge yourselves. Live long enough to be a problem to your children!" But of course I would never do that myself. So let me ponder while I try to remember what I was just doing. Greg just walked by and said, "So mom did you find out if that CD works?" Oh yes, that's why I came over to the computer.
Wind blow through your fertility? We MUST change that line! My mind hasn't decomposed that much yet. Let's see "Take off your clothes, although the wind blows, backside exposed, and let your mind froze." Oops--well Robert Frost I'm not--yet. Ok Crystal, it's your turn!
You guys are wierd. Stop rhyming things! It reminds me of the Princess Bride... Anybody want a peanut?
I love Princess Bride!
Hey Laura, I was just re-reading the poem and it came to me that you can actually read it aloud as a rap and it totally works.
Laura--tell us another story!
A tumbleweed rolls past the blog. Dust settles on the deserted mining town.
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